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Marie A. Rebelle's avatar

Beautiful, Marsha. Just beautiful!

Debdutta Pal's avatar

My heart has woken up from hibernation. Thank you! 🍂

Marsha Adams's avatar

Thank you for reading!

Paul van der Varst's avatar

A touching story about two youngsters who are attracted to each other, but aren't really fully aware of it. A brief moment, when the close-up is taken, they come close but the moment evaporates en becomes a memory. Wonderful story. I liked it a lot.

Marsha Adams's avatar

Thank you! I found a photo that deserved a backstory, and this is the one I came up with; it’s one of my favourites, because there’s so much unspoken.

May More 💜's avatar

just wonderful - so much I get from this tale

Marsha Adams's avatar

Thank you! I was pleased with this one; lots of juicy subtext