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Marie A. Rebelle's avatar

I absolutely love the dynamic. Love that Ffion was relieved at Emily's obedience, love how Emily wanted more, and I love that last sentence!

Marsha Adams's avatar

Thank you! I loved writing this one, because I got to find out a bit more about who Emily and Ffion are, and why the overall story is the shape it is.

Marie A. Rebelle's avatar

I love it when characters reveal themselves to us, whether when reading or writing 😊

Simone Francis's avatar

Going to explore further. I like to two different POVs

Marsha Adams's avatar

Thank you! As soon as I started writing this, I knew I (and the reader) had to be in both heads for the direction and destination of the story to make sense. Plus, in later chapters, it lets me skip scenes I don’t want to write. 🤣